Jazzing up a sentence.

Today we were looking at commas in clauses. We decided to use whiteboards to help us stretch out our sentence by adding in extra information. We used commas to help us identify the extra information.  We decided to use more of our VCOP knowledge to jazz our sentence up even make and this is what we ended up with. 

The boy was late. 

The mean boy, who was called George, got the Stagecoach bus to school but it was late so he had to walk.